Armour Dome
What do you think of this excerpt from my book?
Its for the first chapter called Life Partners. If you haven’t yet read the premise please do so…
Plot Ideas please! I do have somewhat of an idea but your suggestions for the story are much appreciated.
The sunbeams gently trickled down through the great glass dome that crowned the high cathedral in the heart of the city. It was a glorious building, made of fine marble so polished and so pristine one could see themselves standing above it. All about the lofty walls were tapestries of ancient lore. Warriors off to battle, their Partners trailing behind with as much as armor their Masters. Kings and Queens on thrones, their Familiars seated before them on pedestals of their own. Such marvelous scenery it was, but Bella had no time to squander her moments admiring the fine needlework and architecture. For she was much too nervous of what was to come.
great
but remember no to repeat
so polished and so pristine
and so and so and so was his…
get my drift,
its ok, i hope you picked the name bella because it felt right and not because of twilight =)
Jesus of Islam is the Dome of the Rock! pt 1
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Sony Night Vision ARMOR DOME low light Camera + M-48G $75.60 |
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ALC-D101 Night Vision Color Armor Dome Security Camera $59.00 |
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Vari-Focal 4-9 MM AVK016 Armor Dome 1/3″ H.R Color CCD $129.99 |
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